Ok i have a bit i like to say
1. The vocals are out of key at some times.
2. first drop is way to loud.
3. the lyrics are original and fresh but seems like you tried a bit to hard ;p
4. there could be a main melody but you just covered it up with the vocals.
5. this is a lot different from your other tracks and its very well mastered, and put together.
Thats all i have to say, overall its a great peice. i dont know if i would call this something like future bass or melodic dubstep. but either way your filled with potential.
Thanks, Trickshot